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"... like a group of college freshmen

Who were rejected by Harvard and forced to go to Brown!

We're Rhode Island Bound!"

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By now, the rain has turned to snow. Anyway, brown lives matter too!

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I love the two lines with a line space of separation! I think Gray Mirror should pivot to becoming a poetry book, or finish a poetry book and finish the political book.

I think you should slow down on dating until it has been a year of mourning. We had a guitar player in our church band who played like Jimmy Page. His wife passed away. A few months later he quit our church because he was self-conscious about re-marrying so soon. He was right that we all noticed, but wrong that it made a difference to us, but he left us. Maybe peer pressure happens to know it might be better to get over the mourning period before entering the dating and remarriage period? I don't know.

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